Sunday, 6 September 2009

Flash Fiction Offensive debut by Col Bury with A PUBLIC SERVICE...

After having my last submission knocked back over at edgy American ezine, FLASH FICTION OFFENSIVE (associated with OUT OF THE GUTTER magazine), I had a rethink and specifically targeted the site with my short crime story - A PUBLIC SERVICE.

On reflection the initial story probably didn't fit the site and was rightly rejected, but this new one is described by FFO's editor, Rey A. Gonzalez, as 'A much stronger piece - this one's got balls!'

Let me know what you think of the said 'balls' by clicking on the title of this post for the link.

6 comments:

David Cranmer said...

I will head over and check it out...

Lee Hughes said...

Kick-arse piece, on fire at the moment Mr. Bury!

Col Bury said...

Cheers, chaps & thanks for commenting both here & there.
Ps - Tsss...!

Paul Brazill said...

Big, swinging ... yep, it's got em!

Col Bury said...

LOL, Paul. Juicy aren't they?
(Steady).

Matt Hilton said...

Damn good!