Friday, 15 October 2010

Feeling lucky, punk? My new story, LUCKY SHIT, over at A Twist Of Noir...

Christopher Grant's 600 to 700 Challenge rolls on over at A Twist Of Noir, and number 608 (words) is my turn. Feel free to pop over and comment at ATON or below.

Ps. In a rare, but rather large, cock-up, I had to re-submit due to formatting issues and, while cutting 'n' pasting, I missed off the last line... I'll reveal it (my last line, not my....!) in a subsequent post, and you can tell me if it was required or not, as I still feel the current ending works.

5 comments:

Lily Childs said...

Loved it - give me that line!

Paul D. Brazill said...

It's a beaut of a story. Is the last line 'Fandabbydozey?'

David Barber said...

Read it, loved it. Ahhh...long legs!! lol

Come on then, give us the last line.

Sean Patrick Reardon said...

It was a great read. Left a comment over at ATON. Story worked as is, but really want to see the missing line, if you want to share it. Great job!

Col Bury said...

The line was...

"...and they all lived happily ever after!" :)

I'll do a blog soon about it, as I wanna get address the need for every word, etc.